Tuesday, May 4, 2010

Journal Entry #1 [week three Illustration paragraph]



  • What have you learned about illustration in the last four weeks?
Illustration is one of my favorite activities that I have learned during the past couple of weeks because it helps me identify myself with an object. Next, I came up with new ideas to describe my personality that help my vocabulary grow to with new words.
  • How does this help you in school? work? Personal life?
With my friends in class we share ideas and comments on our classwork. When it comes to doing a draft paper, before completing a final paper, we compare and share constructive comments to improve our work. Every illustrates something different that helps us meet that person and learn about them. At work, I deal with my co-workers every day and by learning about illustration I have the concept of what type of personality my co-workers have. I share my paper about illustration paragraph to my family and they were shocked when I compare myself to the Bible. Illustration makes a good point in my life. I have learned that I can push myself to the limits my family are very proud of the type of personality that I have.

  • Set three writing goals for the remainder of the term. State each goal, explain how you will accomplish the goal, and note any resources you will need
Three writing goals for the term will be to revise the illustration paragraph, correct my grammar and spelling and a guide for writing. My illustration paragraph has a couple of mistakes that I have to correct. For example, I can use different words so my paper looks nice and neat. I would like to write a new illustration paragraph to practice more my spelling and grammar that way I can strengthen my vocabulary.

No comments:

Post a Comment