A GOOD MARRIAGE

Assignment #3 and 4b WEEK 3 Definition paragraph

Jorge Jimenez

Topic sentence:A good marriage can be defined as a union of two people love that felt in love and are right for each other.

A good marriage can be defined as a union of two people love that felt in love and are right for each other. A excellent marriage takes team work and both person`s responsibility . For instance, communication is an absolutely important factor in a marriage, like in economic situations. Marriages have their bank account link together so they could know their expenses and have an idea of how much they count on it and how much they can spend. For example, my parents have been married for 25 years I consider this a good marriage. They have followed trust in their relationship without trust they will be going back and forth arguing about each other and never be able to have a good marriage like the one that they have now that for me is a "perfect marriage". Also, a marriage needs equality this makes the marriage stronger as the other factors mentioned before too. There is no "A boss" in a good marriage-both are equal and they should help each other to make their marriage a better one. As without it, one will be always looked down by the other. Communication,trust and equality are Strong factors in a marriage by following these three factor we can create a good marriage.

• What have you learned about writing in the last four weeks?

When it comes to writing I feel more secure about myself. I would like to be more strict on my work so i could improve every day more and more. Definition is another assignment that we have done in class. I learned how to define something in my own words without doing research. That way, the person that is reading my paper has an idea of what I am defining.

• How does this help your school? work? personal life?

I like the way of how I am improving in class by doing this definition writing. My friends in class and I, as we starting a new assignment, we come up with ideas.Then we help each other correct our assignment. At work, I have to send a lot of emails , faxes and do various types of letters. Definition writing is a good tool at my job because i have improved a lot on looking for a perfect word when sending an e-mail, a fax or a letter to make my work look professional. In my personal life, whenever I did not know the meaning of a word, I would run to the dictionary or the internet to research about it. Now I want to come up with my own ideas that will help me define that word without doing any research.

• Set three writing goals for the remainder of the term. State each goal, explain how you will accomplish the goal, and note any resources you will need.

My three goals will be to define more words , improve at my job and push myself to the limits. When I think of a word and come up with my own ideas to define that word, I help myself open up my mind to learn about the meaning of the word. When it comes to a job, it is very important to do your best so they could notice you like your job and that you want to advance to have a better position. This last assignment about definition made my work easier at my job. I feel more secure when writing an e-mail. I feel that my costumers are reading a well written e-mail. Next, I want to push myself to the limits. With everything that I have learned I can become a better writer.